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I would really appreciate if you were to check out this link to a story I have finally had the confidence to share with anyone who cares :/

Despite what some may think, I am no as confident as I seem and I take criticism very hard and personally!

So this is something I have been trying to write since I was about 12 years old so for the past 5/6 years and every time I have tried, I've decided my writing simply isn't good enough so have abandoned it and gone off the idea. One draft I wrote got up to 50,000 words which is about 25,000 less words than Harry Potter and the Philosophers' Stone :/

If you would be able to give me some feedback then either on here or on FictionPress itself.

I will try to remember to update!

The chapters are uneven, disjointed and it seems like the story is being written from half way through which it kind of is! There is a prequel, I just haven't got round to writing it just yet!

The story is also heavily inspired by an un-diagnosed sleep disorder I have and have had since the 25th December 2009. Basically, I go to sleep in this world and wake up in another. The dreams have carried on night after night without fail, picking up where the other leaves off from the night before. The dreams are sometimes horrific, sometimes boring, sometimes downright scary and others, some of the best memories I have.

It is also the explanation to my nickname "Storm". When I woke up in this dream the first time, everyone referred to me as Storm. As I spent more time in my dream world, the name Storm seemed more natural than my real name so I adopted it in this world.

Anyway, enough rambling from me!

There are two chapters up so far which add up to about 800 words. Please review and if I get 3-5 reviews of some sort, I will post up the next chapter!

Blessed Be!

MissStorm xx